Eternal Dominion, Book 2: Traction
By Bern Dean
$4.99
- Series: Eternal Dominion
- Narration: Zachary Johnson
- Featuring: Annie Ellicott
- Music: Justin Thomas James
- Length: 5 hours and 33 minutes
Eternal Dominion, Book 2: Traction
Synopsis
Xeal and friends continue their journey to the top of Eternal Dominion. However, as Xeal searches out potential leaders for his guild and bolsters its ranks, others are moving as well. Will he and his guild weather the storm, or will they lose their footing and be stopped before they can even really begin?
Author’s Note: Yes, I begin to introduce romantic complications in this book; yes, Alex’s/Xeal’s relations will become more complex and integral to the plot of this series as it goes on. No, I will not be writing any smut scenes; I will set up things and skip all the details (my 73-year-old mother reads these, and yeah, enough said). I hope you all understand that for Alex/Xeal, having a meaningful relationship was something that escaped him in his first life, and this time around he is going to try to make it work sometimes a bit too hard.
© 2022 Bern Dean ℗ 2022 Soundbooth Theater
Details
- Release Date: 10/04/2022
- Imprint: Soundbooth Theater
- Genres: Adventure, LitRPG, Science Fiction, Time Travel
Additional Credits
- Proofing: Nicolas Lagrand
- Editing and Mastering: Mike Smith
Needs a Rewrite
Not a bad story, but it has too much tell and not nearly enough show. These stories feel far too short and rushed because of this issue. The other issue is word choice, honestly the author really needs to pick up a thesaurus. If you're listening to this story for the first time get ready to hear the word ecstatic at least three time a chapter. Over all, an interesting concept that fails utterly in execution.
Action
the story had great action hope we get more books like that in the series. Loved the Audio to this book can't wait for the rest to come out
Fun
I was highly entranced by the book and the voice actors. I truly was pulled in and enjoyed the antics. Though I did not appreciate the harem or love triangle, I did find the approach appropriate and the telling humorous. I’m really enjoying the series.